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小编:长安 64雅思写作对于诸多“烤鸭”来说可是一个难以跨越的高分门槛,对不同话题有不同的纠结之处。现在环球教育索长宝老师就来举例告诉大家面对这两个话题该如何出招。
1.科技类话题摘选:
段落结构:A---C. a-b. (For example, unlike the past(xa1-xb1-xc1),b1—因为-a1,---c1&c2)
现代务农方式的使用能够很大程度的提升农作物产量。Xx高科技能够提升工作效率xxx。例如,不像过去——要知道那个时候大量农业活动都是依靠传统人力和牲畜滴进而农业产量相对很低。当前这几十年,中国的很多农产品的产量已经大幅度提升,就是因为大量滴水灌溉技术&化肥农药等广泛地&合理地运用。这一定程度上不仅为消除饥饿&贫困做出了贡献,而且也拉动了社会经济发展。
那么对于以上话题用英文怎么应对呢?跟随索老师来看一下吧↓↓↓
7分版本:
By utilizing modernized farming methods, farmers could raise outputs of their crops. Technology is quite a way to improve work efficiency. In the past, most of farming activities relied on labour force and livestock. However, recent years have witnessed a sharp increase in the yields of corns and maize in many developing countries like Ukraine, Thailand, Brazil and China. This is mainly attributed to the undeniable fact that dipping irrigation techniques, chemical fertilizers and insecticides were exploited extensively and reasonably.
8分版本:
Raising the yield of agricultural produces by a large margin is the primary and fundamental explanation. Technology is quite a way to improve work efficiency. As is known to all, unlike the past when farming activities mainly relied on humankinds and livestock and the output of agriculture was lower relatively, recent decades have witnessed a sharp increase in the output of crops like corns and grains and fruits such as apples and bananas, in China, thanks to the extensive and reasonable exploitation of drip irrigation, chemical fertilizers and pesticides. Not only does such an achievement contribute to alleviation of poverty and starvation, but also it fuels socioeconomic development.
2.广告类话题摘选:
段落结构:A---C. a—b (For example, c1被导致通过a1,---b1)
墙体广告的存在帮助人们消除生活中的枯燥乏味。广告经常是以提供有趣的信息为特色的。例如,人们会感觉很快乐、很轻松,当他们在旅行以及逛街的时候,因为墙体广告上的那些有趣的&可爱的&滑稽的场景和故事。这是一个去阐明墙体广告的存在对于人们的影响的很好的例子。
继续来看英语怎么说↓↓↓
The boredom in people’s daily life is reduced by a large margin, with the existence of advertisements on walls. Advertisements usually feature funny and fascinating contents. As is known to all, the public usually feel happy and relaxed, when shopping and traveling, mainly due to oceans of charming and interesting stories and pictures painted on walls. This is a good example to illustrate how influential the wall ads are to people’s life.
以上几个写作段子按照索老师的写作章法+学术写作句型完成,高分不是梦!